Heaven is....
When you get your first kiss in the rain,and you can't help but keep smiling days later..
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AngelFlower
Heaven is______
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What a sweet thought, never had my first kiss, though
but who knows it could be under the rain
I'll definitely be smiling days later if that happened ^^
To be honest, wasn't fond of heaven being defined
with romance and all but this line, I definitely find it lovely
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I remember my first kiss in the rain, it was so not like the movies, I was cold and wet not the best.
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thats on my list of things to do...be kissed in the rain hehehehe i've got a poem about being kissed in the rain too
cuz!
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Ahwww not fair I cant remeber mine...
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I've never been kissed in the rain..lol.
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Aw... Very pretty. I remember my first kiss in the rain....
Lovely poem, bring back lovely memories.
Thank you
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KISS
Keep It Short and Sweet!
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Glad you liked it.. well I'm going to just guess you did.. =P
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yes
certainly did!
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Definitely simple - and sweet! Good job!
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Thank you.. glad you liked it..
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