It hurts to...
Talk to you with a smile on my face, when my heart feels likes it's going to break
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AngelFlower
It Hurts to_______
A contest entry
- Fill In The Blank Again by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended May 9, 2008, 114 entries
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A touching and honest piece. I can so relate to this, very hard thing to do. Wonderfully done, good luck in the contest
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Thank you.. I'm glad that you liked it..
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Aww...good line..All the best!
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I have done this before, you try to act happy when you really are so far from it.I have been here before and can relate.
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i know that feeling!!!!!!! boy do i know that feeling....
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Wow Jetleena, this is a really touching piece. It may be short but it is beautiful! Good Luck in the Contest!
By the way i just added a new poem called 'I can't' Can you give me your opinion sweetie?
Again, Lovely piece! <3
Laura. x -
TOUCHING!!!
It is so hard to keep that old game face on when talking with the one you care about and they don't care back.
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awww, now this is sad! how true it is sometimes being with someone what you dont love and trying to keep the relationship going like there is nothing wrong. very heartfelt! good luck!
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