Tis said that flowers feel no pain when’ere we start to prune
And yet we’re told to make them grow we sing them all a tune
Now if they all need a happy tune to make them grow with verve
How do they develop a musical taste without an audio nerve
Now if they all have nerves as such it makes you wonder why
If they can appreciate a tune have they also learnt to cry.
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very simple and subtle
thanyou for the entry -
Thank you for your beautifully spoken entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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cute, made sense, and came full circle.
I loved this poem. not only was it all things iv'e heard, but put into a rhyming poem, it was just great. applaud to you.
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I think that you created a really good image here!! I really enjoyed it.. You did a great job.. Well done.
And best of luck!
Angel
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Angelflower
Many thanks for your kind comments on
"Our Floral Friends" glad you like it Angel
My Appreciations and Best Wishes George
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