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Bathroom Bliss!


 
 
 
Without
you in my
life,
the toilet seat
will always
be left
down! 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Sue Cardwell

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  • Autumn Whisper
    September 7, 2008

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    LOL Great poem Sue, I loved this. It's so true though isn't it, men always leave the toilet seat up, but at least I don't
    great poem once again
    best wishes as always
    Autumn Whisper


  • PatheticKt
    April 24, 2008

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    Haha, humorous, indeed
    Nice take on the line you've thought of =]


  • Legend silver member
    April 21, 2008
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    Wonderful touch of humour
    Excellent


  • SomeonesToySoldier gold member
    April 21, 2008
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    Ha Ha Thats great. the eternal battle of the toilet seat. I love it


  • Commodore Rouge
    April 19, 2008

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    Oh, that's great! At first I didn't get it, and now I don't understand how I couldn't. . .I love stuff about bathrooms. Anything in a bathroom is amusing!


  • moonbumps silver member
    April 19, 2008
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    Lovely funny and so very very true!
    Love Hilly xxx


  • Blooming Poet
    April 19, 2008

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    LOL. This is a very sad and yet funny poem. this made me smile and may I say thank you for that. great work.


  • Perception
    April 19, 2008

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    Very cute! I love this perspective...

    Thank you for the smile
    and best of luck in your contest


  • arafura gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    Women! Why do you always leave the seat down? LOL! Great fun to read poet. Good luck in the contest!


  • breedluv gold member
    April 18, 2008
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    Ha ha! Only a twisted mind could come up with this perspective! I love it!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 18, 2008
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    You never had a 3 year old son...
    Good one.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 18, 2008

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    Hahahahahah.
    I like that a lot.
    Says so much in so few words.

    Good luck int he contest
    Sue.

    Love
    Wayne Leon


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 18, 2008

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    Lol, this one makes me laugh. Quirky, but true! My ex used to complain to me for leaving the toilet seat up! Grrr.


  • Mistress Masquerade
    April 18, 2008

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    haha, beautifully random as the best things in life usually are. i love it. short sweet and to the point. best of luck!


  • Fourthaxis
    April 18, 2008
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    LOL!!!

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