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If Only


If only I had been able to whisper I love you before you went away forever.

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mountain-woman

A contest entry

How does this make you feel and can you relate to this

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  • I can relate.... i had a friend kill themselves and i never got to say good bye. it is heartwarming. i love it.


  • PatheticKt
    April 24, 2008

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    Aww, this is heartbreaking, indeed.
    Not letting your loved ones know what you feel for them
    before they leave is pretty much devastating
    Good quote, this will be a reminder for me, all right ^^


  • Kelli Marie
    April 18, 2008

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    This is so sad, because there are so many people who leave things unsaid and then it is too late. Very nice writing. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


  • Blooming Poet
    April 18, 2008

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    so sad. I love it. I aploigize you may have to re enter the other one, I had it on one entry per person. Silly