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If Only

 

If only love still had value
to those who really need it

 

 

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  • movedon
    July 28, 2008
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    Wow...This is very wise and profound Chris.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • PatheticKt
    April 24, 2008

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    Quite true, I guess love can be unfair in some instances. Nice quote you've thought about here and I like the background of this piece: It's adorable ^^


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 18, 2008

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    I know exactly how you mean here those that are broken hearted and alone, who need it the most, see no true value in the words anymore, very well put. I like the heart in the sky made of bubbles too, it's really cute!


  • Kelli Marie
    April 18, 2008

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    I think you did a great job with your choice. Very well written. Your background is quite distracting, but the poem is good. Good luck.
    Kelli


  • Blooming Poet
    April 18, 2008

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    I wish it did also. I really do wish that it did. Thanks so much for sharing such a beautiful fill in the blank

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