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The Letter

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Night they hope for miracles

to prevent what waits tomorrow

from bringing the day neither wanted.

 

Love's encounter still holding their heart

eve's spent exploring it's treasures

never wanting anything to end

the magic both found in the other's arms.

 

How they tried so hard to forget

during they day he wore military green

and though he spoke of risk from duty

how they both lost its memory in intimacy's amnesia.

 

Then envelope came with orders

tomorrow he'll take the journey to where death lingers.

 

Her mind still goes back to that last time they had together

while re-reading the letter expressing regrets over his death,

now spending each night in arms of his ghost.

Author notes

1) pic above. give credit:By kastavnn on Flickr

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  • StarEyes
    April 18, 2008

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    Oh, I know that feeling only too well. I felt every word of that one... every night. You did a great job capturing those feelings..

    Best of luck in that contest!


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 18, 2008
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    wonderful write
    beautifully done and so sad
    great job and good luck
    take care
    stephanie =)