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[ The wonderful rose ]

The wonderful rose
Of many different colors
You look so so bright





A blend of colors
Of so many different shadings
You are beautiful




I love you so much
and hope you live forever
I will be happy

Author notes

A Haiku poem with 3 verses


-freckle central-

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Comments


  • Miss Chievous
    May 3, 2008
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    that was pretty!


  • The Green Elf
    April 19, 2008
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    i'm glad you accepted my challenge!


  • The Green Elf
    April 19, 2008

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    it was totally awsome exept for one thing,
    you have 48 hours to read the rules and fix your Author's notes.
    other than that i loved it!