Hello, and thank you for letting me vent to your answering maching.
I just wanted to let you know
I think you're a liar.
A filthy little lout,
You wondered who I wanted you to be,
Took your best guess...
Wrong.
Sorry.
Play again later.
Because that's all this is to you,
A game,
And I the prize.
So now you're in your room,
Wondering who I'm with,
Watching green shadows flicker across the walls,
Waiting for your phone to ring again,
Guess what,
It won't
A contest entry
- Nobody Perfect by Tara1396.
305 points, ended May 12, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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OWWWW. that hurt somebody
you were mad at some one and I can guess who. I can't belive I never read this till now. And I love how you used you love of leaving really long messages on the answering machine as your base thingy. Nice rage
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I liked how you expressed your frustraion. I have days like this from time to time. Good work!!
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