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Like a Whisper

Like a whisper, flowing softly through the pine
on the tree, in my backyard,
on a summer's evening;
Just like your here now, dancing on the clouds
in the picture you painted,
on this sky above;
 Like your voice calling me home
 Like your love rushing through me...
     That's Glorioooouuuuuussss....
     That's Glorioooouuuuuussss....
     And we love yoooouuuuu
     And we love yoooouuuuu!!

 Let us know... that you are Godddd...
 Let us know... that you are Godddd...

Author notes

This is purely a worship song. It's not completely finished(i want to eventually add a second verse), but for now, i thought i would share it.=) God Bless you,
worthy is His name,
crosseyed
Written September 23rd, 2003

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  • Onfire4Jesus
    September 1, 2004
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    Glory Hallelujah I shall not be moved!! What a great song you just wrote here crosseyed!! I have really taken a liking to your poetry. You write from the heart and you are filled with love and compassion for God!! Praise God!! You are truly Glorifying the Lord when you write for His names sake!! Thanks for sharing this beautiful song!! God Bless You!!


  • Saab
    December 21, 2003
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    This was really good, Ash!! I can hear it singing now... Except.. I can't, but I kinda can...Okay guess who's confused? That's right, the ol' Saabster. Crikey on a cracker.. I dun confused myself. ANYWAY lol... Like Welbis said, this used really good imagery, and I can't wait for that second verse!! Great job and God bless -Saab

  • welbis
    December 14, 2003
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    if only i could hear the tune...as a poem..great imagery to begin with...then obviously turns into a song so i cant really comment....if only you wrote songs in my chuch

    take care, god bless ya