You throw me against the wall
you hit me repeatedly
you get so mad sometimes
pushing farther and farther away
remember when you pushed me down the stairs
cant you see the pain your causing me
you say you love me
you say parents know best
but when you get mad you don't
you push me to the edge
my eyes are getting darker
nothing in this world seems worth it
what did i ever do wrong to you
i have been rescued
you can't touch me now
i hope you see the pain u caused
you tore the family apart
i feel i no longer have a heart
i am falling deeper
the darkness is swallowing me
someone save me please
before i start to bleed
A contest entry
- Scar Tissue by ea.
900 points, ended May 2, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Skeletons in the Closet? by XHollowXEyesX.
800 points, ended June 2, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Happened to me when i was younger and this how i felt
Comments
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wow this is such a heartbreaking piece if writing. I like how you didnt go into a full depth story about your parent that abused you, sometimes soing that can make it seem somewhat fake.
This write is flowing and straight from the heart. the only thing that did make it a little difficult to read was that there is no punctuation, but the easy flow did ease this problem.
beautiful write.
Thankyou for entering
All the best
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I'm sorry, I don't see anything in here about an actual scar which is what I am looking for in this contest.
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im cring
wow wow wow wow I'm gonna cry I'm gonna cry. this is really sad and so true. I know how you feel cause I've felt the same way. we get down sometimes but we just have to get back up.
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I know that so many of us have to feel this way. We feel ourselves slipping and scar tissue begins to form in our hearts leaving us with love waxing cold toward many. Then when no one reaches out to help we fall completely and it takes us forever to get back on track. Some people never make it back; dont be that person. Please be the one like me to make it out.
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Noone should have to go through this torture. i feel and see the emotion and this a very powerful write kudos to you
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cryy
that was so heartfelt i can feel your pain but dont be bitter about it
and wow that just totally strengthened my resolve even more
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