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Morning Bud

Brushing off moondust,
Broad petals stretch their sinews
And breathe in the sun.

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    April 19, 2008
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    Lovely haiku and very well done thank you for entering


  • Kelli Marie
    April 18, 2008

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    A very nicely witten haiku. To be honest, I have never seen a haiku written with end punctuation. Even when I took the class. It was always lower case and no punctuation. Though that was modern haiku. I know I read in the shadow poetry that haiku can be all caps or all lower case. Good luck to you in the contest.
    Kelli