The hand over my heart controls my every move,
My eyes leak crimson tears as i recapture every memory.
It wasn't that long ago when i lost you,
And then my face slowly quit shimmering.
I don't understand why i have to go through so much pain,
I don't quite get what i've done that was so wrong.
I feel like im slowly going insane,
No one cares they all just keep going on.
I'm not strong like i used to be,
When i could just turn around and move ahead.
I've almost lost all will completely,
To go forward to let my soul be widespread.
I shed another tear as im walking on down,
No one knows how bad im hurting.
I feel like im gonna drown,
In so little time my life has just been inverting.
One moment im one way,
One blink im another.
One chance i am happy,
Then i turn around and shudder.
My
Life
Has
Been
Hell
I don't know what to do,
If i die oh well.
I still wont see you,
It doesnt matter how far i fell.
Or how hard i try to hide my self, I can never be invisible
Even though that is my biggest dream.
Im simply indivisible,
Life is never what it seems.
Im doing my best,
To hang on to this life i do not want.
My heart beats slower in my chest,
Memories they always haunt.
I try to take another step,
As i try to get over this.
The only thought in my head,
'Semper Fortis'
Author notes
Semper Fortis
is latin for
'Always Brave'
my week has been very bad..
and i need a boost..semper fi-fo-pa
is the only reason im still alive..
literally
A contest entry
- My Life Line... by Condemd RyeZing.
525 points, ended April 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark picture prompt contest..... by jcat.
1100 points, ended April 23, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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Thi truly was a stunning piece and I much enjoyed reading it!! I just wanted to thank you properly for entering my contest and again I love your use of latin here. My mother speaks latin if you can believe that one
..... Wonderful take on the picture and thank you
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Excellent job here and I love your use of latin!! Thank you so much for entering my contest
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Nice. Very nice. It's having the world on your shoulders, and all the other planets too.
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good
tis good
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