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Gas Mask, Acid rain, Master is his name

Dripping from the needle, crystallized passion
Gas mask rubber on his face, soaking up chemicals from my past
Rubber gloves slap against my ass
Rope burns on my wrist
Tied down by the sounds
His murderous hands run through my hair, down to my panties
Twirling my sensation through the intoxicating fumes
Chocking me with gaze, dried blood and sweet scent of death
Chocking me with belts from his tattered pants
Whispering things such as these
"Your my slut, I am your master,
you like it when I put on my mask, burn you with these lighters so deep,
your pussy is so tight and beautiful, let me change that and cut you open like a science class project"
Tears only cause him more pleasure
As I am covered in his manhood
I try not to show any reaction, maybe he will get tired of me..move on and let me go home
I was so stupid to wear this low-cut dress
Now covered in sewage rain and other girls blood
Gas mask in my face, his eyes stare through my heart
I only want to leave and take a shower
I only get tortured more when I don't scream
Shoved in a shower of acid
My skin totally scared
No one said that torture had to end in beauty
But he dolled me up and I hang from the hooks on his wall

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  • Ravensdark
    June 22, 2008

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    Made me want to kill.....abusive men is my biggest pet hate they give the rest of us a bad name...kill em all and cut them into pieces not even god could sort out...potent delivery


  • Deathless1
    May 2, 2008

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    oh, i really love this. it is fun for being so dark and blunt with it's word use.
    i really loved it.
    mouth opener,
    KNIGHT TIME


  • Wicked Nithilist
    April 26, 2008

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    Intense

    This was so full of emotion and the discription was wonderful. I was swept away and yet I stayed the whole time with the story. Great write, wonderful title.