Little red ridding hood
Have you been being good?
Lets go for a ride
you don’t have to hide
I can take you anywhere
Tie back your long sexy hair
Do you want to go to grandma’s first?
Out of the way, we’ll get the worst.
Then I can take you where you please
Hang on tight, hold with your knees
Lets go, get away from here,
to the bar and have a beer.
After that,
I would like to chase a cat
Are you in?
Come with me, lets commit a sin.
Author notes
photo credit: http://images.paraorkut.com/img/graphics/20071122014505_20071021120746_MELISSA-Chapeuzinho.jpg
A contest entry
- Fairy Tales - Retell or Remake them! PREWRITES OK more points as we go! by Melissa Burns.
425 points, ended May 6, 2008, 18 entries
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Comments
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Well I asked for a retelling and you certainly did that! You are my first red riding hood entry, and I'd rather hoped I'd get one. Thank you for the unusual entry, it was a good read
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did you look at the picture promt?
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I did look at the picture, which was interesting as well Thanks again.
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