i never been scared of death
cuz it comes 2 all
its just life after death thats been buggin yoll
will i face enternal damnation 4 all the wrong that i've done
or will i make my way in2 heaven
i guess only time will tell
compelled 2 be a rider
but thats just gone hasten my down fall
in fear on bein alone
eventhough thats how i walk day 2 day
throughout my life
if i dont get shot down 2 day
then 2morrow i might get knifed
that shit sounds about rite
neva been a fan of pain
but thats wut my life b like
so much i've endured
i just i've matured
and yes i pray ere day
i guess my biggest fear is if i find out that GOD was fake
who cares i'll still believe until it my time 2 leave
A contest entry
- The Sum of All My Fears by andywontdie.
4500 points, ended May 5, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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A fear I have certainly grappled with myself, I used to have the fear of death, I still do but in a different more 'mature' way I guess...its hard for me to see a world without me in it and its just a very abyssal and depressing feeling when I start thinking about it. I can't say that I am a fan of your vocabulary and short hand approach (no offense) but you got your point across well and thats all that really matters in the end. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
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Interesting fear you have, all the best in the contest
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