At the end of the rainbow
there is something more precious than gold
A childs laughter
The sweetest sound
A child playing
Waiting to be found
A child lost
In a coloful dream
At the end of the rainbow
there is something more precious than gold
A contest entry
- Ages 12 and under: THE END OF THE RAINBOW by Sky Prince Ireland.
500 points, ended April 29, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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BEAUTIFUL AND SWEET!!!!!
There is indeed at the end of a rainbow something more precious than gold, happiness and love!
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LOVE IT!!
Indeed at the end of the rainbow there is this poem that is far more precious and far more beautiful than gold!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS LORIEN!!
Very pretty, grown up, sweet, delicate and so much more!
Keep it up cutie,
Nooni
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Aww
This is so very beautiful and sweet. You've got a great way with words and imagery. For an 11 year old you've got talent way beyond your age. Rainbows are amazing, just like you. ^.^
<333
~IvoRy
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i really like the take on the promt, its cool how you say that a child's laughter is more presious then gold and how that child is dancing around waiting to be found, this is really good, keep up the great writing, good luck in the contest, -Amy and Nathan8
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That IS something more precious than gold, Lorien. A fine write this is; I simply love it. Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.
Brian
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