Swirling orbs dance when you smile
and makes me go whimsy inside
I blush backwards
color rushing to my pouting lips
Suppressed cheeks of surprise
at your touch
….please
lead me on a path to you
Forever stain upon me
the riots of unquenched mirth
Breathless to the marks spread
masked in a lover’s evolution
A contest entry
- ~Have fun weekend contest ~ by MysticalRayne.
475 points, ended April 23, 2008, 4 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh my! What an amazing piece you have penned. It truly hits the mark on those first emotions of love beginning....I loved every word/ every line!
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It sounds like something nice is happening here. More than likely, the first blush of love. Confusing but nice, all discombobulated.
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Very nice take on this prompt ~ I love how you made this into a love poem ~ best of luck
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