Codalanscasin To the eye of the hurricane to see the eye of the hurricane can you see the eye of the hurricane and can you see the eye of the hurricane see to the eye of the hurricane there is a way to see the end of all the creation you see and in the end there is a way to see the end of all creation you see and if you could see the end of all creation what would you see to the eye of the hurricane what would you see. To the eye of the hurricane what would you see if I told you I ain't the way to see to the end you would see the eye of the hurricane see and in the end there would be a great explosion and in the end there would be a see. To the eye of the hurricane what would you see if I told you I ain't the way that you see the eye of the hurricane see to he end you will see the eye of the hurricane see and in the end there would be a great explosion that only you could see to the end you would see the eye of the hurricane see.
Author notes
To late to see the end of the hurricane see
A contest entry
- The Sum of All My Fears by andywontdie.
4500 points, ended May 5, 2008, 20 entries
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Not at all sure what you are saying here, the repetition is far to much IMO. The only thing I seem to be reading is 'you will see the eye of the hurricane see' over and over. I'm to lost in the words 'see' & 'eye' to make any sense of it, sorry. Good luck in the contest
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Dizzy
The repetition was interesting as I relate to the churning whirlwind motion of a hurricane. Very intense, this storm of thought almost makes me dizzy lol. There are a couple of words that I am unsure of; the first word Codalanscasin, Tolleein(in the title) and the part when you say '...would be a great explosioin and in the end there would be a see.'
do you mean 'sea' or 'see'.
Thanks for your entry and good luck!
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