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Bullets

Recollect on thoughts
When the fire explodes
Inside cold steel
Gun metal black
Games of money
Extortion
Murder
Another day at the office
No doubt
Marks indicate
No leads to follow
Notorious the bunch
Glass shatterproof jaw
Laced in oils running machines
Driven to overdrive
Until the balance is
Unacceptable
Rings of the high tides
Caress the sands
Ending here around this
Hole of untouched moisture
With arms in the blazer
Hitting the majors
Understanding business is business
But inevitable is forever

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  • Deathless1
    April 21, 2008

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    i really love this one, it is about my thug life.lol
    the slick Vs, don't mess with us!!
    break your jaw.
    i did like it so...


  • dabpunx
    April 18, 2008

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    poignant

    Only the dead see the end of war -Plato.. I think it was him that said that. My friend just got back from overseas, dont know if you're a vet but you see the way it is handle, this business of death. must add that i am against war for profit etc.. Lines are perfect and to the point. I shalll read more.


  • kittyz
    April 18, 2008
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    nice write. it flowed well