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Tribal Eyes

I am drawn to alabaster skin
and red lips meant for sin
I am mesmerized and tempted
I salivate with waves of delusions
that rouse the heat of a sacred curse

Elongation

Transformation

Twin souls entwined within a crimson portal
tribal ink made immortal
I give voice, a rapturous growl
a tigress on the prowl

Author notes

Thank you MysticalRayne for the inspiration! I rhymed so I couldn't enter, but my Muse was pleased with the prompt.

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  • individuality gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    i like the tribal aspect here, made me think of tattooes with tribal ink, so many love those, i have a load of tattoo poems not posted here though as yet


  • MysticalRayne
    April 18, 2008
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    no go ahead and enter it I just can't stand crappy rhyme this is good