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I touch

Missing image
The ivory mask
Tattooed with care
Hides her raven black hair

Diamond eyes
Calling to me
Look inside, see what I see.

Scarlet lips
Ready to kiss
How can I refuse...this? 

“Come and take me.”
Whispered in my ear
My wanton mind is forever near.

The masked beauty
offering much
her silky body...
                  ...I touch.

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  • Nighttime angel
    April 24, 2008

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    oooh I like this one.. excellent job on this poem. flawless with the rhyme once more.

    Congratulations on the Bronze Trophy

    kat


  • MysticalRayne
    April 21, 2008

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    Beautiful and your rhyme flows smoothly. Best of luck in the contest