Better keep an eye on him he's at it again.
One day he's going to mess up and your going to have to kick his butt.
You best watch out hes looking up that girls dress.
Frankly its all in your mind but,
Rather then risk it i'll keep a short line.
I love him dearly and not going to risk.
Everything just cause of that slut or that bitch.
Now i know he might be loyal and he might not be.
Don't worry though his leash is caught and i tied it in a knot.
its no good but im having writers block
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I hate writers block with the burning fire of a thousand suns. Not bad for a block poem though! The emotions are real. But let me tell you there are guys out there that are like that and then there are guys who are totally loyal and awesome. -Liz
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Guys. They are all the same
But it's such a sweet yet real poem.
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ha! this is so true!
i know exactly how
that is nice poem
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This is a funny poem. Okay, it is about being obsessive over a guy, but I guess us gals never change, now do we? Yeah, I can see the writers block bit of it, seeing as it is still very choppy, but a few edits from now and this is going to be a really great poem. I enjoyed it.
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yeh..i can tell,lol u have a wonderful poem here..really u do..but its like ur trying to say smething and u hold it back.theres more to this poem...let it out check mine out x x x
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