Love
has got to be
the most complicated
thing in the entire world.
It
is always wanted,
never forgotten and
sometimes makes your head spin.
If
faced with the
choice of more than one
heart, headaches become the norm.
Until
the choice is made
and one heart is truly broken,
all because you had to make that choice.
A
choice you
never wanted to make and
just wanted to ignore for ever.
But
it wasn't going
anywhere anytime soon
so you cried until you could pick.
With
each tear
came a reason for
whom you were to chose.
And
you kept asking
yourself: Why oh why me?
this isn't fair to anyone.
Soon
you couldn't
take the pain anymore
and you finally made up your mind.
Being
happy with
your choice was the
hardest thing about it.
Always
wondering if
it was the right choice and
is the other one going to be ok?
I wish ,I my self had never to decide
and hope the other is alright
although he has found
someone else i can't
help but feel
he isn't
happy
Author notes
i was/have always kind of been the one person everyone likes. It kind of sucks. So ya i'm sure my love life isn't a triangle more of a really complicated figure with like 1284700000009 side.
ya....
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A contest entry
- Love Triangles by Celticjedi.
600 points, ended May 7, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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The truth of the love here is shared with the deep reactions of the life..I love the impact very touching work indeed...
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Congrats on the HM. The triangles are really neat and the whole concept of the poem very nice and unique.
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Great write! Sometimes Love is the most complicated thing in the world. But people would be completely lost without it. Congrats on the HM!
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Wonderful job! I agree, love IS the most complicated thing in the world, and you portrayed the confusion and questions really well, not to mention all the triangles. Well done! Thanks for entering my contest, and keep up this awesome work. Good luck!
~Cj
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I think instead of:
With
each tear a
reason came for
whom you were to chose.
it should be With
each tear
came a reason for
whom you were to chose
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fixed it R. happy?
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win, not wing. oops.
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That's a really good poem. I like the triangles very well. You did a great job with this. Hope you wing!!
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