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I don't want to change








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A contest entry

A poem for a contest.

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  • tillybabe
    April 20, 2008
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    i no how you feel


  • stylization
    April 18, 2008
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    yes. this is me.


  • Lsh-x
    April 18, 2008

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    Wow..

    I LOVE This poem, i can really relate to is.
    Thanks for the comment on 'ordinary Girl' by the way


  • XXPrettyLittleSinXx
    April 18, 2008
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    i can totally relate...


  • look for tomorrow
    April 18, 2008

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    Off the chain. Lol. but really this is awesome. You are so gifted, especially in your poetry, I can physically feel the pain, and rejection. there is no way that you need to feel like this. People only see the outside, they don't understand what they are looking at. What they do understand is that we are different, and they criticize us for that. Its bogus, I know but it happens, thats not at all saying thats right but it happens.


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    true

    but then they dont know what true beauty is anyway. It isnt what you see with your eyes but what you feel with the heart. You keep being yourself and let them do their own thing. God bless you, Mark

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