Like the beauty of a deep red rose,
Love is a feeling without thorns.
Love is . .
Accepting one faults and strengths,
Compromising and sharing,
Laughing and crying,
Growing and dying-
but
True love lasts beyond the grave.
and
Like the roses without thorns,
It follows us to eternity!
dragonheart1
A contest entry
- Short Love Poems by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very nicely done. A simple and powerful message, disguised well as a lovely poem.
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Beautifully written
True love lasts beyond the grave.
This piece is wonderful...
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I really like this! Nice job!
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My oh my...Visiting your poems is so heart warming and full of wisdom...True ....true love never dies...I love your analogies here on love as the rose!....Keep penning dear poet!
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Beautifully written. Very well stated
Happy 2009!!
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This is amazing....! the sentiments are so special...! the poem is also true.... completely...!
much happiness!
becca
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awww beautiful,
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Totally beautiful my friend.
You have penned much wisdom into this write, and as always, your words have touched deep my soul. I love the way you allow your thoughts to come forth, they are so gentle and loving, just like your heart sweetheart.
You have a beautiful soul and it shows up so clearly in your writes.
You have been a true pleasure to read my sweet beautiful friend.
I wish you much love and happiness
Always your,
Angel of Whispers
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Oh this is eternal
with a love like that it can flow through time and space, beautifuly written, you poured your emotions and heart into this and it struck my heart like a arrow piecring the very core of it, well done Mr poet!
Blessings
Rend
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ooo!
I love this,
it is so stunning and beautiful and while it is so dark and sad, it is light and open and welcoming. This poem is a really encouraging write for anyone who reads it, and I especially love your reference to the deep red rose
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Yes, bitter sweet love hey? I think your metaphoric use of roses without thorns were very clever and can open a whole new debate... mmm inspiring!!!
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wow i loved it!!!!
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love it ... amazing... keep it up xx
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AWESOME!!!!
I loved the way it was all poetic and it was beautiful! I think you should keep writing!
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beautiful, absolutely beautiful. love always makes a beautiful comparison to a rose, but this is stunning. i love the beautiful description and it is very well written
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I love the thoughts and feelings in this. Love and intamacy is an interesting concept in poetry, it's "eternalness" is an idea that I've liked for quite a while. Nice work!
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Some very beautiful thoughts written into this
Love can be so beautiful and unconditoinal..
Blessings to you and yours.
frozentearz
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amazing and beautiful
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Totally lovely; the sweetness of love. You capture the essence of passion.......novy
write on!
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oh that was so cute and true what is there to say?
i loved all of it!! im bookmarkin this one =]
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u like ur love poems great love them all too
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