This poem is in Memory of my sweet brother he wrote this poem to me before he died, he died the same night he wrote me this poem and til this day i miss him. this poem is
BY Eliot James Brown
Drinking!!!!!!!!!!!
Tonight as I party
I forget who I'am
Why you ask, cause
i get drunk and do
things i'm not suppose
to do, but i do it anyway
if you think its cool well
it's not I'm telling from
experience.
to my best friend and my sister judy keep it strong and don't do the same as i've done i will always love you my sweet sweet sister
By: Eliot James Brown
This poem is when the world turns grey; so what do you think about my poem
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oh I'm so sorry. This is good advice though. I had something similar like this happen to me from my older cousin except he told me and didn't write it out.
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thats woo
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awww thats almost depressing.
Im really sorry you're brother died and im not one of those people who are like "i know how you feel, my grandma just died" because thats like not the same thing at all. But i definitly know what its like to lose someone. This is lovely -
Sad yet very true. Alcohol can destroy and even ends someone's life. So sorry to hear about your loss. Hope his unfortunate death will be a lesson for your to remember and live by. Thanks for sharing these painful memories.
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This is very very sad. You could use this poem as a sort of warning to others not to do the same thing. It is very sad.
Wayne Leon
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i love this poem cause it by my brother
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