All alone I sit in the night.
No one to talk to, no one in sight.
There I sit daydreaming of you.
Hoping this dream could somehow come true.
Only if you could see,
None of my friends will let me be.
Yearning to be set free.
Managing to stay real calm.
Close my eyes, wipe the sweat from my palms.
Keeping myself in tack around you.
No one can help me, what should I do?
I have to escape this terrible fate,
Get it together before it's too late.
Here you come closer, though you're still far away,
Thinking of you always, I hope you think of me someday.
A contest entry
- Love Askew by whispernthedark.
875 points, ended October 7, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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awww.. very heartfelt.. very beautiful.. great job..good luck in the contest..
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I hope they do think of you as you think of them.
this is lovely, and yet kind of sad at the same time.
I hope everything works out for you
thanks for entering
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Very nice write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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great write
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