Teasing the nurse with formaldehyde in a surreptitious way,
pleases the young vampire.
The medical staff is triggered by wasted complications in sick elevators.
The month of April is passing too slow,
As deceiving little girls hide their infected cuts with long blood stained sleeves.
To flat-line is what they wish,
But as glitter from dead ballerinas fall so gracefully on numerical devices,
their heavy music begins to die down.
That misunderstood young vampire leaves the nurse and finally joins those little girls,
To teach them to value something meaningful instead of tears and razors.
Thousands of old apparitions appear as many in the medical building are taken off of life support,
And this hypothetical dream of a bored teenager is abruptly stopped.
Author notes
This is the option I chose:
OPTION 1 - Wordbank.
[use at least 15 of the 20 words listed]
[you may use any variation of the words]
- Surrepticiuos
- Medical
- Meaningful
- Life Support
- Glitter
- Decieving
- Flatline
- Vampire
- Music
- Electronic / Robotic
- Wasted
- Numerical
- Trigger
- Sleeves
- Value
- Formaldehyde
- Apparation
- Complication
- Missunderstood
- Hypothetical
A contest entry
- Make.It.Interesting.♥ [OPTIONS] by ShotgunSherri--.
750 points, ended May 3, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very nice. The idea of a vampire helping out cutters is unique among the poetry that I have read. Great job.
Mike
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Wow. A great piece.
Its different and i like it.
i love the ... theme shall we say ?
the message.. the topic...
i love it
thankyou for entering.
x.x.x.
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