If the man up above
Saw what I see,
His tears they would flow
So constantly.
Starving staring children
Have to look for their Mums,
Food searching thorough refuse
Whilst living in slums.
Young girls walk in fear
And hope to escape,
Fear and depravity
And numb thugs who gang rape.
If he knew what i knew
He'd shake his sore head,
Because of his direct inability
To save those who've been bled.
The rich eat the poor
They say its the rat race,
Thats bullshit for sure
You know, we must know our place.
From prophets to paupers
They seed disease and despair,
Shut away safe on tv
Entertainment for those who don't care.
So if he knew what i knew
And hes supposed to, you see
Whys the world so fucked up
For them, for us and we ??
Divided oh yes
On a planet watched by a God,
Who's does nothing to stop it
Dosent this strike you as ODD ?
18/04/08
A contest entry
- If God knew what I knew.... by walkingstick98.
450 points, ended April 28, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you...this is exactly what i was looking for. I loved it. The language was strong but somewhat needed for the point you were trying to make. I loved it and thanks for entering my contest
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Thanks do much for the gold for this poem
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Thank you for your kind comment im glad you like the poem and understood the need for some strong language
Namaste..
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woooow!!! i love this poem!!! u are really good this is a great poem ! i made one about God,called forgive,check it out ta x
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