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I'm in tune

Up down and any way around

gliding swiftly to and fro

around the bend and over the cars

Its only natural to see the world in this state.

 

Fluffy puff clouds

and soft gentle rain

make the heart the soul the thought

whole again.

 

Orbs so bright and holding such power

Grasp a mind and lull it to sleep

bringing warmth and tranquility

Only do the wise discover.

 

*Scratch scratch*

eyes open and ears twitch

"dont' scratch kitty"

Another dream ended.

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  • StarrieNacht
    April 19, 2008

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    Hahaha great write! The beginning was a total hook and the ending was a really creative one!
    Thank you for sharing this write about dreaming! Well done!
    Take care of yourself
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