Vapor trails
dragging me through
your upturned world
swallowing air
and crumpled pages
yet to be seen
I put down the book
and watch your plane
tip further from my eyes...
Author notes
Prompt is: "The Day I Stopped Breathing"
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 18, 2008, 11 entries
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Honorable mention
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Comments
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ooohhhh...
now this is rich penning...
love where you took this prompt...well done!
congrats on the HM...
I love the way your Muse works...it's always magic!
Blessings! Tammy
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Very creative and inspiring...well done in meatphor and meaning...wonderfully done...
thank you for entering! -
Wow lovely write ...
Good luck honey
Simon
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