When the day tide broke
I hit a blind alley.
With a voiceless sound
grinding a halt to
my respiration suffocating
my breath of life.
I was launched into eternity.
Author notes
30 words promt
The Day I Stopped Breathing"
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 18, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Invit Only... by mysticstorm.
425 points, ended April 22, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh my word...
your take on the prompt is very alluring...
creative and well penned!
congrats on the HM!
Blessings! Tammy
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A lot said in 30 words--well done!!--Best of luck in the contest!
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Very beautiful in flow and word choice...soft but with depth in meaning and brevity...well done...
thank you for entering!
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