Red ink flowed from the pen
Turning the page change
a puddle appears
As I started to write again within seconds
so now I write with another color |
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Author notes
The poem is inspired by the graphic above. I loved how the colors changed with the season.
It starts from the red ( last one on the second row )- anger, then as you can see her thinking and feeling angst, then the blue represents the deep sadness and tears, and then lastly the gold graphic representing hope.
A contest entry
- Picture prompt; 10 entries, I NEED 3 MORE PLEASE ENTER!! by perfectsunset.
380 points, ended May 6, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Immortal execution for the brain
Comments
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The way you weaved the seasons, colours and feelings into this is brilliant!
I am very much enjoying my wander through your pages today!
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I like this - I like the references to colour and mood-change - works very well. Good luck in the contest (might enter as well )
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I love this I have a pen of every color and feeling - Color definately adds character to a poem.
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Beautiful I love it
it is very wonderful and so true keep it up
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This was a very beautiful and originally crafted take on the picture prompt. I really like your ideas, something very different and full of colour. I like the idea of her writing in different colours during the different seasons and each colour represented by an emotion.
Thank you for your lovely write. Best of luck & thanks for entering
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what a wonderful take on the prompt!
This is really a beautifully soft write and filled with hope and happiness - well done my friend!!!!
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