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kilter






incorrectness radiates
the mirrors axis
90 degrees could swelter
or it could swivel
showing the DMZ hidden
within my brain

the zone
forever out
of kilter.




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  • Justmenow
    April 20, 2008

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    interesting poem and very provocative, very well done i enjoy reading a poem that will actually make you think about things, once again well done


  • Mari Goes
    April 18, 2008

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    This made me think of firewall...blocked or secured.
    I like how you 'connected' the thoughts with very interesting words to use in poetry like swivel.
    I wonder how your mind works...