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Coiled

Curled up,
Coiled up
like a spring.
Packed away
trying to escape.
  Am I small enough, yet?
Go ahead,
close the case.
Pack me up!
Ship me somewhere.
I know,
  You, only see
a broken vase.

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Contest, Broken and damaged

A contest entry

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  • zochit2me gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    I really like this...
    Something about it draws me to it and speaks to me. So often people look right through us and never see "us".
    I thank you for entering

    Becky