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Eyelash

My shadow is made of the same substance
As the eyelashes of statues
It is a second I--
I am one eyelash on the lid of Earth

If planets could make wishes,
I think Earth would purse her lips
And blow her hurricane winds at me,
Sending me into her orbit, to circle her like an embrace

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  • clichedriven
    April 18, 2008

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    Deep

    very profound
    very deep
    I really loved this one. You couldn't have lost ur inspiration and if you did I can't wait until u find it becuase then ur poems will just completely blow me out of the water.