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[ Sitting in the park, staring out in space ]

Sitting in the park, staring out in space
her hair matches her face
Soft skin, milky tone
I slowly drift into a day dream..

Whispering in your ear
Running my dick down your face
Holding the knife gently to your throat
My heart and pulse began to race
I run the knife towards your lip
Dead bodies surrounding me, for my sexual pleasure
Cover you in blood of my victims before you
Telling you, if my knife were to slip..
then you would have a nasty cut i would have to fuck
Jabbing it into your throat so slowly that you would be dead by my first load
Blood and cum, I laugh in your face
As you tremble
Taunting you as i cut your panties
Laughing hysterically as you cry
"Your tears just lubricate my dick when i stick it through your eye" I say
She's tied, and she knows she's got no where to go
Cause this might be the last night she has to live
Running the knife down to her pussy, she gets wet and i taunt her
"You like this don't you, don fake it..you want to die" I smirk
Cut one, two, three
Then i hear a loud cry..

I wake up, sitting where i was
Watching the children play
And my next victim gone, but ill find her when she dreams...

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  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    April 18, 2008
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    This is really an amazing write.
    KUDOS!
    you managed to turn me on!! (imagining myself as the victim, not a child......)
    THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR ENTRY!!!!!!!
    You are a talented writer and i didn't want this piece to end, haha.
    Fuckin brilliant, thanks again, best of wishes


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    I love this! But then I am a sicko.