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Rear View Mirror

They all think you're sick of friends and folk,
But my crimson monkey loves you most
And the only thing I'll ever understand is you.

We'll cartwheel across the bright pink sky,
slow my breathing down and cry.
It'll all come down to fullstop for you.
The birds will sacrifice their spring
And all the animals will bring
Our new love song with a red bow on top.

You've locked me up so snug and tight,
Made sure that I'm not out of sight
but the only thing I'll ever understand is you.

So please break my heart.
I hope this was the wrong thing from the start.
And burn down my walls.
But catch me just as I fall.

Sorry about the leprechauns

but they wanted to meet the silver swans.

I'm so brainwashed with colour no thanks to you.

 

Everything's come down to this, 

Like a soda's run all out of fizz,

You're just a tree in my rear view mirror. 

Author notes

Behold the first love song I've written!! Inspired by "Anyone Else But You - The Moldy Peaches"

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  • Blueisacolour
    May 15, 2008

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    Ahahahaha, I was hoping you'd post this so I can comment and act like one of the big shots on AP.
    You already know I love this immensely. Hell, I know it by heart.

    'The birds will sacrifice their spring'
    -Sheer brilliance, I say.