Smile
Lucky days have come to Earth
The sun shines
Shadowing the badlands
Destiny made its move
For the sake of your smiles
Spill the joy; your nightmare is gone
Author notes
"The day I stopped breathing" <- Used as a prompt.
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 18, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well done...very uplifting and inspirational words for the prompt...creative and orginal...
thank you for entering! -
Hmmm, I like this one <3 It's short but to the point, sad yet optimistic. I dunno though, that's just the vibe I get off of it. Anyways, it's a great piece, best of luck in the contest <3
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