My body decayed
burdened soul heavy
confused mind devoid
Chains of mortal life
lift from
imprisoned spirit.
Free
Freed at last
to merge
into the universal love
of timeless death.
A contest entry
- Prompt 10 entries/ 30 words more or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended April 18, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize freely, I need input to improve
Comments
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What a wonderful write on a look at death...how it really is and how much a part of life it really is...very well written and with such beauty...
thank you for entering! -
I do not see any thing to critize..your words are true self of spirit yearning for the beauty of death which is timeless in the scheme of the universe. Your meaning is clear and precise. Wonderful read.
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