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A ‘Legend’ With No Title (at all)

I’m thinking and thinking

In memory-wells

I think I recognize that smell

That decomposing THINKER inside his shell

Then I heard an ECHO

(O’ do tell…)

Bounce off of something else

I’m a one-man Cartel…

 

This must be a ‘Who’s Who?’ gag-real

I’m molten metal, then I transform to steel

I have that shape-shifting feel

LEGEND was raised on garbage

He’s a green banana peel

Who takes pills to cure his ills

But there’s NO CURE for no-frills

 

Here’s my bill:

 

I lay it out, stage by stage

None of these clowns know my rage

THINKER’s eye-Q is too low

(But he thinks he’s a sage)

How many times must I tell you to act your age?

You’re still stuck on the agricultural page…

 

LEGEND only thinks he wants some of me

(I’m full grown Pee-Wee)

You threw up your last post after you drained the brewery

Beg the THINKER for help

(He also can’t handle me)

 

What you pass off as skill, can’t survive another run

It’s tired like you

Drowning in bourbon

I’m tired of carrying you son…

 

Snap out of your lethargy

In this land of ‘minds’, you’re a refugee

Pack your things

It’s time to flee

If only you could count, you’d know the risks

This is my poetic-catharsis

I’m The Captain you hooked buccaneer

Here’s the end of your ‘dead-end’ career

 

Where’s your smirk now LEGEND?

Your make up runs when you cry

My aim is exact (rookie):

 Bullseye!

Author notes

This is a direct-hit on Swangrnv's "LEGEND" character in our on-going 'epic' battle ("The THINKER's Word Warz"). Standard DISCLAIMER: We are only kidding with each other. We are co-collaborators and do this for mental exercises.

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  • mindpoet
    April 19, 2008

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    God this is excellently witty and merciless. Look forward to reading the rest of your WARZ & enjoying every word of it. Words up dude!


    • AsIThink gold member
      April 19, 2008
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      Thank you again. I appreciate your encouraging comments. I won't be on very long this morning (trying to do a few things) but as soon as I can, I'll be by to read from your pages. Again, thanks for coming.


  • WiseWithWordz
    April 18, 2008
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    damnnnnn

    if i hadn't known any better...and i do, this sounds like me son, your father....lol! this piece is exquisit! oooouch! someone just got hurt, damn legend...lol sorry to hear those funeral bells....lol...oh yeah and by the way...(Inker, THINKER sends his regards with a kiss!...lol! this joint was sick!


    • AsIThink gold member
      April 18, 2008
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      LOL...funny. funnnnnny. That's the spirit. "The THINKER" can take as much time as he needs to scrape those cobwebs off his skull. Him and Van Winkle must have been up all night thinking before they fell asleep on each other...lol. Yeah, not that anyone needed to tell me, I see it will be a while before I have anything to be worried about...lol.

      --Page Inker.


  • xPink-Lotusx
    April 18, 2008

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    LMAO!!!! You guys are super funny and this piece is a smash! The lyrical quality still amazes me! This piece is truly 'Tough'! Well done Poet, well done indeed! Smash!


    • AsIThink gold member
      April 18, 2008
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      lol...if you like re-runs, it's on again at 1p, 2p, 3p...lol. Thanks for the reading. Doing these pieces somethings makes us forget that others are possibly viewing them. We are having more fun writing than probably anyone else reading (lol).


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 17, 2008

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    ok ok!

    message recieved, I just got off the telli w/ my dog L... he said to let you know he thinks you're kinda spunky for a lady! l.o.l.


    • AsIThink gold member
      April 18, 2008
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      Sorry guy..."The Page Inker" is out at this time. But if you leave your name, number and a worthwhile message, he might notice it and give you some of his spare time.

      [Page Inker's Auto-Messaging Unit]...

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