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Beautiful Sunset


Standing by the tide
my thoughts drift away
the sun begins to set
as the cattails sway

A breeze is gently blowing
my hair gets in my eyes
the love from you is flowing
through my veins at all times

Sunsets and gentle winds
seems to alway cheer me up
the beauties shimmering begins
and my breath is simply caught

I have no visions except of the rare
beauties that my eyes do behold
marvelous colors swirl and glare
as my happiness seems to flow.

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    Yes, doesn't looking at the beauty of nature just give us so much happiness!! This was very pretty and uplifting.
    Thanks for the entry