He tells me he loves me
He says he's not lying
But in order to believe him
It will take some more trying
How can he say that
When he's flirting with her?
With all of these promises
It's hard to be sure
I don't know how he feels
Or what he is thinking
All I know is that
My heart will continue sinking
Until he assures me
With all of his heart
That he loves me
Is that so hard?
Author notes
Um..well...this is my first poem so don't be too hard one me? xD
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awesome
awesome
i like the 3rd stanza the most
ive never felt that way before, but i can...understand/see...like how you feel...
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Thank you for the comment. ^^
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This is sweet, short, and a good write. ^.^ *squees* It's very good!! lol I really like it, hunny. =]
the rhyming is good, it flows nicely, and it's very relateable.
You did very good, babes. =D =D
~S~
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Yay!
I wasn't so sure it was very good.
Thank you vewy much!
*gives you some cheetoes* =0
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this is great. so true
Awwwwwwwwwwwww That's a wonderful poem. It is totally true.
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