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Think Spring!

 

 

 

Think spring!
Crocus peeping
Pink and purple bonnets
through the snow.  Then comes daffodils
and jonquils waving their hats in the breeze
saying "Hello, Sunshine! What a
great day today!"  Now the
grass needs mowing...
Think Spring!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    May 11, 2008

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    Beautiful background love those beautiful spring flowers.I see nothing I would Change in this as for my favorite part I can't choose.
    Thank you for entering my contest.
    Good Luck.


  • trista gold member
    April 27, 2008

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    P.S. I love the background to this...it is a bit distracting, but you've picked great font colors so it shows up well.


  • trista gold member
    April 27, 2008
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    Hi debilynn,

    You've presented such a cheerful poem, I can't help but smile and feel warmed by it. Unfortunately...it's also a sad reminder that our lawn mower's engine needs replacing after dying last summer, and we have a huge yard to mow! Thanks so much for entering such a lovely rictameter in my contest. Best of luck to you Hon, and I hope you're feeling better...

    Good luck and God Bless,
    s
    ~J.



  • paullallady silver member
    April 26, 2008

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    I absolutely love the background on this poem. The colors are beautiful and so springlike. The poem is wonderful and terrific and I love the way you add that touch of reality about lawn needing mowed. great great job on this one.


  • Arkbear gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    Hi :)

    This is really a fun write....great Rictameter with perfect count.....the background is a tad distracting, but nonetheless, a very cheerful and fun write indeed!

     

    Lots of Imagery pouring through your lines and it made me feel like I just came into a beautiful picture of Springtime, watching a flower parade :)

     

    Nice job!

     

    Good luck to you and your entry,

     

    ...God bless you,

     

    Bear ~


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    April 18, 2008
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    Great poem and nice background to match. I love the part about the jonquils "waving their hats"!

  • goalsv
    April 17, 2008
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    A lovely spring discription and a form poem at that. Great job.


  • HeirOfEnoch
    April 17, 2008
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    I hate mowing the lawn....
    I love this poem...

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