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Heart-throb.

She sighed
like an angel
who withdrew all tensions,
                  to release.

As I watched [unnoticed]
her emerald jewels pierced my soul
consuming my heart
and her hair flowed with the wind
a contrast to her perfection.

[I'm in love]

 

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  • crimsondew
    April 27, 2008

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    You caught the prompt well...All the best ...

    As I watched [unnoticed]
    her emerald jewels pierced my soul
    consuming my heart
    Beautiful lines...


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    April 18, 2008

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    Such a beautifully expressed answer to the prompt.

    Welcome to AllPoetry and the best of luck in the contest.

    Love Margaret


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 18, 2008
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    This is just beautiful and immensely creative... x


  • VerminVomit
    April 17, 2008

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    pretty...ish...iguess...

    i never knew that angels (i never belived in angels but ill pretend like i do) sigh
    her emerald jewels pierced my soul sound weird but really awesome


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    April 17, 2008
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    awww good luck in contest..


  • luna-midnight gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    awwwwwww ^_^

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