...and somewherebetween his soft lips
worshiping my name
and the delicate
arch of my back
grew a flower garden
for his eyes only
as his gentle hands
tended lavender and lotus
petals and pleasure
lavishing the warm sunshine
of his soul
into my heart
where unspoken fields flourished
because he loved me
and I,
I bloomed
in the courage
to let him
Author notes
whenever you are unclad you become a flower...unknown
This quote is a prompt.
picture courtesy of http://allpoetry.com/PrabhuDayal%20Khattar
A contest entry
- a flower... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Perfect...this is just amazing...your beauty flows through your words and creates such enchanting moments for all...this is Gold in my book...everyway it falls...
Always,
sis
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Winner!...can't imagine a more perfect write for this particular prompt...but I'm not the judge here...Peace, Rhonda
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wow - this is absolutely gorgeous!! Very soft with very lovely imagery
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this is one of my faves. by you ...bookmarked
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Ah..what a wonderful poetry ..I love this charming piece my friend..thanks for sharing such a impressive piece....Well done
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Blissfully delicate this rolls off the tongue reading ... Stunning write hun
Best of luck
♥
Stay safe
Love to you
~Manda
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This is really beautiful, sensious and loving. I read it several times just because I liked it.
Love,
Amera
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wow, you DID huh? This is warmer than your usual.
Very nicely done Tam.
Paul
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