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Here Lies Old Bill ( Epitaph In Rondelet Form )

Here lies old Bill
I'll bet that Heaven is in shock
Here lies  old Bill
Not exactly ,he's never still
With smile on face, wreaking havoc
There is no boat that he can't rock
Here lies  old Bill.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 19, 2008

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    Very well done have a comma out of place in the forth line and an extra space in the last