My pot of gold
I would use it to buy more legos
a ten speed bike
I would buy hover car
Yellow with black racing stipes
He would look like bumble bee from transformers
I would buy
all the Play stations and the games
I would buy my mom some scrap booking stuff,
Because I know she likes it so much
I would buy my dad anything he wanted
I would buy my own legal driver’s license
I would buy my family a fancy dinner
I would have a million drill ion dollars left,
I would save it
Author notes
promt 2 what i would do with my pot of gold
A contest entry
- Ages 12 and under: THE END OF THE RAINBOW by Sky Prince Ireland.
500 points, ended April 29, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Under the rainbow by trekkergirl.
900 points, ended November 26, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is sweet but I wanted to know what you found under the rainbow. This is a nice write however, you are very talented for being so young. Great job.
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Hey, Nathan! You're very good for your age, and it's interesting to see what you'd do with so much money (and it's sweet that you'd buy things for your parents). But a driver's license? Ah, if only you could buy one!
Keep writing!
-Cristina -
Hey, Nathan! You're very good for your age, and it's interesting to see what you'd do with so much money (and it's sweet that you'd buy things for your parents). But a driver's license? Ah, if only you could buy one!
Keep writing!
-Cristina -
It is so sweet that you would buy things for mom and dad. I am sure mom would use the scrapbooking stuff to keep memories of you
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I like your poem
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great job
Very good Nathan. You certainly have a lot pictured in your mind to write this poem. It's always a pleasure to have you in my contests; thanks for entering.
Good luck.
Brian -
nathan this is a great poem, i love everything you would do with your money and it makes me happy to know that you would even share some with me and your dad, that shows us that you really love us, and taking us to a fancy dinner is a great ideia too, i know dad would like the part that you would save the rest of it, good luck in the contest and lots of love ♥ from your mom
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