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decide

  actions became costly

decide every faith-
growing hatred

imagine jagged kicks-
lies manage natural opinions-

protest quickly rights
so trapped united-

vicious words x-rayed yesterday-
zero

If you look at the poem its all the letters in the alphabet in order from a-z

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  • penman gold member
    May 22, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Short, but very descriptive and full of energy. Thank you for sharing.


  • Kimiko0329
    May 21, 2008
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    Yah I'm 6 thx 4 da comment I like you poem BTW


  • fangs to blame
    April 26, 2008

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    very creative my friend. lol babypunk13 really speaks her mind huh? But to me its a nice write.

    Fang


  • babypunk13
    April 24, 2008
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    i dont get it


    • paperbackwriter
      May 21, 2008
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      do you get anything this is very deep in my opion and to be a good poet you have to understand

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